My Haiku for Mizu No Oto

moofang (36)in #haikucontest • 6 years ago

Pregnant Earth and Sky
Red across the gray Divide
Streak of sacred Blood

This is my entry to the Mizu No Oto Week #1 Contest, and also probably my first real haiku :)

6 years ago in #haikucontest by moofang (36)

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f3nix (59) 6 years ago

Very very original concept and symbolism.. makes my photo look like a contemporary art painting.

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moofang (36) 6 years ago

The more I stared at your photo the more I liked it. It's got so much openness and gray and symmetry

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theironfelix (62) 6 years ago

Wanna revive paintings based on photos?

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bananafish (62) 6 years ago

Your haiku transpires yugen, it's like the appearence of a kami spirit.

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moofang (36) 6 years ago

Your comment is almost itself like ethereal poetry :P Thank you!

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theironfelix (62) 6 years ago

If there ever was an artist statement, this would be it for this photo. So I naturally agree with Dr. F3nix below. Upvot’d.

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moofang (36) 6 years ago

Thank you kindly!

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brisby (59) 6 years ago

Great lines! I like how you see fullness where others wouldn't! I wish I knew more about haiku to be able to give you a better comment but I don't.

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moofang (36) 6 years ago

I wish I knew more about haiku to be able to write better ones, but thank you!

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