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RE: Do Haiku Need to be Three Lines?

in #haiku7 years ago

It's certainly good to know the rules before we attempt to break them. Thank you, @dbooster, for this piece on an intriguing & profound form.

As an aphorist, I've always been drawn to whittling down poems to their essences, a quality a good haiku tends to embody.

Here is something of mine inspired by the form:

morning epiphany
applicable to love and life
in haiku-like purity:

only freshly squeezed
separation is natural
shake well to enjoy!

In fructose veritas.

Cheers, Yahia

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That is pretty good. Thanks for sharing it!

And thank you for reading my post :)