Frosty morning breaks.
Crisp sun spreads warmth and luster.
A tiny bud shines.
I guess I'm so used to 5-7-5 structure, hope that's ok!
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Frosty morning breaks.
Crisp sun spreads warmth and luster.
A tiny bud shines.
I guess I'm so used to 5-7-5 structure, hope that's ok!
Perfectly ok - no worries. Thanks for the entry :)
So, my second entry to your contest would become:
Spring is green.
Not snowy white!
We feel blue.
Got it! Nice, I see on my contest post you formatted to fit my contest rules. Good thinking.
Actually, I did the shorter one second, but it did feel sort of artificial to put it into 5-7-5...