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RE: Haiku Contest #2: Bugs and Arachnids in Winter

in #haiku7 years ago (edited)

My non-entry for this time:

The Prince of Summer:
By the Bo Tree,
surrounded by insects.
Never winter.

And a more cynical take:

The Sad Messiah:
By the Bo Tree,
insignificance surrounds me.
Always raining.

(The bugs in the second version are metaphorical, and hinted at, works when you know they should be there.)