This is a great opening of your story. You shared a lot of details already so it will be easy to understand the next chapter. Thank you for sharing and I'm looking forward to the next one!
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This is a great opening of your story. You shared a lot of details already so it will be easy to understand the next chapter. Thank you for sharing and I'm looking forward to the next one!
I'm glad you enjoyed it! The direction in the next chapter might be a bit unexpected, but from what I've worked on, it's shaping up to be pretty good so far. I hope you enjoy it!