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RE: FullTimeGeek -- Men in Blocks (Men In Black Parody)

While the chorus is a little out of tune, and could maybe use a female guest singer for the high notes, the rapping parts are beautifully written and performed, and the rhymes are on point.

Heck, even the gibberish third verse rocks, because in a parody you gotta get a little kooky, and then I especially like that you throw the whole thing back to your audience: "no rhymes to do, now it's time to get back to you."

This creates a sense of participation and community for the listener.

Here's my reply to the FTG guy
I can't tell you why
But your rap's a natural high
Takes my spirit to the sky
And makes me want to fly
So carry on sending your bots on friendly raids
Throwing verbal grenades
Keep conducting all your trades
Cos all of this aids
Steem's future wearing shades! :)

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While the chorus is a little out of tune

I plug my ears every time it plays 😁 ... I did this in like 1-2 hours for shits and giggles

This creates a sense of participation and community for the listener.

Great idea! Let's pass the mic to the community. I hope somebody takes what you wrote and put it on track, well done :)

Love it lol. :)