Nice action for a short story like that. So far the stories you have make me want to read more. What was chasing her? Why? Did the spell work? Thanks for the freewrite! Good job!
You are viewing a single comment's thread from:
Nice action for a short story like that. So far the stories you have make me want to read more. What was chasing her? Why? Did the spell work? Thanks for the freewrite! Good job!
Thanks a ton for that comment @thraellock - that’s what keeps me writing! I’ve got some longer ideas in mind... I’ll have to get to work typing them up
Posted using Partiko iOS
Good deal! I'll be happy to read what you have to write. I posted a longer short story I threw together. If you have a minute...or 5, I'd appreciate some quick critique from you. I would be honored if you, as a professional, would let me know if its even worth the paper I would have printed it with. haha! Take care @aejackson. https://steemit.com/stories/@thraellock/shortness-of-breath-fantasy-modern-day-short-story-part-1