I like this story, as a suggestion, it would be more beautiful again this fiction story if there is ending it.
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I like this story, as a suggestion, it would be more beautiful again this fiction story if there is ending it.
Thank you for the suggestion. The five minute timer went off and that is all the was written. Perhaps the story could be continued and get better characterization and more of a plot too. I'm not sure if it would be worth doing or not though.
All must be done with confidence, it will produce maximum results. there is no doubt to start. we as human beings do not escape from mistakes, but all we must be aware and ready to fix it. all of that also for our own success