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RE: Freewrite - Bamboo

in #freewrite7 years ago

great post. may I give you a addition to describe about situation deeper?

When deeper and deeper I walk into the bamboo forest I heard some sound as if It called me
when the wind blows slowly heard the creaking sound from behind the bamboo on my right and left
I caught glimpses of the leaves moving slowly. the more I watched the bamboo leaf resembling fingers waving to invite me to come closer.

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I like it.

thank you.
i like your plot and your story. It's a kind of advanture. you tell with crispy word. buiding of the story can be understand every reader.