Freewrite ::: VITAMINS in an empty but full capsule

in #freewrite7 years ago

This is an entry on the prompt VITAMINS by @mariannewest. Originally written by hand by yours truly:

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Mom left us with Grandma 3 yrs ago. My (our) father abandoned us and got family of his own. Mom tried our (her) best to survive. She sent us to school and provided us with what we need... until Stella, my sister, was diagnosed with sickness.

Mom struggled because Stella's medicines were expensive so she went abroad. Not having what was expected, mom flee away from her employer and stayed in the embassy...now for months, without any salary. No more medicines for Stella.

I asked for empty capsules and gave it to my sister. She can't recognize them. I closed my eyes for awhile and told her we could only afford VITAMINS until Mom comes home and we can buy again her meds.

When she's sleeping, I kept my face on the ground, weeping to our Creator who provided us for years that we were abandoned.

After several days, Stella's condition became better with every dose od vitamins i offered her... in each time I close my eyes.

Mom will somehow go back, I can't wwit for her to be around.

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I am not a good writer but everyday I see this activity as a challenge. The above is just a fiction story but the faith in creator is innate in the writer.

Tchau, until next time;
@plumandrain

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Practice practice practice, my potential ka po Sis :)

Loobin...para sa ekonomiya haha

so bitin po! Longer please hahahaha! After reading the story... it left me a lot of thoughts and wishful thinking what will happen next.

It's a five minute freewrite lang po eh ;)

nice blog po.

The Lord never Faileth to Provide to those who loves Him. God is good 😊

How do I join this activity? I also want to exercise my writing skills by writing fictions. I'm sooo bad at it. Anyway, this is inspiring. Keep writing sis! ^_^

I heard from @irmao.dan that you're a good writer. Join @mariannewest's dailies

I’m so lucky 😍