5 min freewrite: Quarantine
BEFORE YOU BEGIN, I DID MAKE A SONG FOR THIS. YOU CAN LISTEN TO IT HERE(https://soundcloud.com/mitchell-a-thornton/worthy-pursuit) FOR A DIFFERENT EXPERIENCE ALTOGETHER :) [hopefully you can have the song playing in the background while listening, my ‘studio’ is in my truck so it ain’t that purty]
(Personal phot by Me)
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I am, I am - a quarantine
The best that you could do’s compare to me
I get a catch of what you’re barely
Able to scratch the surface memory
The constant bitter plea
Am I a quarantine?
We got pace above you
Like height we’re tall enough to
Base a simple love you
With cryptic work of virtue
That settle set to merge you
With play and purse she curse you
But she ain’t worth the pursuit
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I did sort of bend the rules a smidge for this. I wrote for only 5 minutes. But then I did a bit of editing to make it work for the music more. I hope that can be forgiven. Love you everyone!
Thank you to @mariannewest @wonderwop @kaelci @deirdyweirdy @wandrnrose7 and many more. I hope you like this!
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Amazing! :D
Thank you <3
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Uncle Bruni here, loved the #freewrite poem and the two melodies. Clean up the vocals just a bit, I had a hard time understanding them on my shitty phone. 👍
This is what I'm talking about! love it! 🤗😍
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I love youuuu
MT do me a favor don't comment or upvote anybody for the next 7 days. You are very low on Resource Credits. Just create one #freewrite a day with no edits. Here's a look at your power.
Love the song - like Bruni said, clean up the vocals a bit and it's great. ;)
And the poem is very raw, I like it. You're a talented guy ;)
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I would like listening this aong dire tly here on Steemit. I hope Ned and his team Will improve this feature.
STEEM ON!
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