I somehow missed the beginning of this story and kept postponing reading the next parts, 'cause obviously, I had to go back to the beginning. And I finally did. Wow, it was so intense, especially reading them all in one sitting.
You're an excellent writer, @byn, and I really liked it at about part 4 or 5 when I realized how tense I was, great build-up! I can't wait for the next part :)
Thank you! I'm taking the parts and editing/working through it in a separate doc as I go. I hope to flesh out a full length ebook by the end of it all!