Well, that'll teach me not to read others' stuff before I start writing. I had in mind a gal with a VR headseat running in place at Dad's command, to keep her safe from killers who stalk female joggers out there alone, pounding the pavement. I guess I could still write it. If I'm out dog walking and the story plays out in my head, I often feel "done" with it and don't bother to write it. Bad, bad, bad. But your story is good-good-good!