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7 years ago in #freewrite by byn (63)
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ok girl...you know you have people hooked when you say "this is going to be a bit longer" and I'm like Yaaaay!! Plot intrique is building, fantastic!
hey what is " intermittent fasting" by the way?
Lol! YAY! That's the response that I was hoping for :)
Intermittent fasting, I fast for 16-20 hours a day and eat in a window of 4-8 hours. I wrote a post on that, too... I write a lot about everything, but I'm taking a bit of a break lately as I work on some outside-of-steemit projects!
Miss Byn...that is awesome! I mean the fasting success, the weight loss, the brilliant post everyday. The fast is a key success component of the Keto diet which my wife and I are doing but the time is more like 14 hrs but I know the longer time the better. I like Keto because there's no worry about counting calories or anything, in fact the more fattening the food the better as long as it's healthy fat, no scales, we don't even own scales, but the weight just falls off like magic. thanks for the explanation I love those guys, those phagocytes guys!
I somehow missed the beginning of this story and kept postponing reading the next parts, 'cause obviously, I had to go back to the beginning. And I finally did. Wow, it was so intense, especially reading them all in one sitting.
You're an excellent writer, @byn, and I really liked it at about part 4 or 5 when I realized how tense I was, great build-up! I can't wait for the next part :)
Thank you! I'm taking the parts and editing/working through it in a separate doc as I go. I hope to flesh out a full length ebook by the end of it all!
This is really amping up with the suspense. I feel that inner fear and that dawning understanding of being alone with somebody stalking you. Maybe because I've had some experience with a stalker for many, many years. Great writing!
Thumbs up# I need to read the other parts of the story ASAP
Byn, so funny to see your selfie with the Reese's because I just read feltbuzz and asked in a comment if he'd share his with me, clicked post and your picture came up next! I guess that's synchronicity to the max and I'm going to have to go and buy some peanut-butter cups ;)
Ok, now I'm going to read what you've written!
Lol. The funny thing is that I don't really even care for Reeses all that much. That's why I felt safe sticking the wrapper that close to my face. :) I don't eat until 4:00 and if it had been something I actually LOVE, I would have had some issues!
Whoa! Great freewrite too! Scary and always feels extra creepy when something happens and you realize you don't really have anyone to ask. I encountered that when I had a surgery and nobody to drive me home/take care of me. Found a friend who did it and ironically, did have my brother come and stay when recovery was longer than expected.
Well I hope your experience was a little less terrifying than this one is shaping up to be!
That is quite funny, though!
Thanks for the compliment :)