RUNNING IN PLACE (5-minute Freewrite)

in #freewrite6 years ago

RUNNING IN PLACE (5-minute Freewrite)

a 5-minute Freewrite by A.E. Jackson

RUNNING IN PLACE - a 5-minute Freewrite by A.E. Jackson
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The habi-trail spun below his feet. The country side scrolled past his head. The fan forced air blew over his sweat drenched skin. This was running at its very best!

For eight months the ship had drifted through space toward her final destination. But 'drifted' really wasn't the right term was it? No, She was sailing. Moving at three quarters the speed of light, the ship was damn near ripping through this corner of the galaxy.

And yet the scenery outside the six-paned, reinforced bulkhead windows slid past like the virtual scenery of his daily habi-trail run. Maybe tomorrow he would scale the Alps, or once again take that run through the depths. There was a strange exhilaration running along the Marianas Trench.

But those stars would continue to slide past. Broken only by the occasional gas cloud, distant black hole, or sprinkling of planets huddled together near their warm star.

The habi-trail slowed, and came to a stop. Tomorrow, he decided, he would run the Alps.

T H E E N D

© 2018, A.E. Jackson. All rights reserved.


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Well, that'll teach me not to read others' stuff before I start writing. I had in mind a gal with a VR headseat running in place at Dad's command, to keep her safe from killers who stalk female joggers out there alone, pounding the pavement. I guess I could still write it. If I'm out dog walking and the story plays out in my head, I often feel "done" with it and don't bother to write it. Bad, bad, bad. But your story is good-good-good!

Thank you so much for the kind word @carolkean - I'd still enjoy reading the thriller you described!!

Hmmm. I hadn't had "thriller" in mind but now that you mention it... I can see it!!
The VR headset enables her to see things that shouldn't be possible to see... so she has to get off her treadmill (Dad's running in place idea) and go warn the would-be victims....

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