As a steemian that creates articles on food, I think your post is ok. But what's really missing are some photos of your final result. I wanna see how this cake looks like when its completely done. And it seems ike you skiped that part.But is ok, you'll do it next time.
What you did good, congrats for that...is that you took photos step-by-step and gave as an idea of the whole process.
This is my advice for you! And like @alexdori, said, keep posting! Try to give the best of you, I promise that your work will be appreciated! So. Keep Steeming and Create your own original articles :)