You have a minor misspelling in the following sentence:
The Main Reason Why We Peoples Are Not Able To Achieve Our Goals Is Our Dedication & Mentality towrads Our Goal People Wants To Be Successful But They Fear To Fall And Work Hard For That Success Even They Dont Try At Thier level Which they Can Do They Wait For Time But they Forget That Time Doesnt wait For anyone !It should be their instead of thier.
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