She never stopped to wonder why walnuts looked like brains or why baseball players were so rich or why five was the perfect number of ice cubes in a lemonade. She just knew these things were so.
And that's why I didn't really like her. She never stopped to wonder.
Pretty good small story. Almost a poem, even. Not a f-art poem, but I can appreciate this, little brotha.
It did feel like poetry but I gotta tell that this popped into my head on its own. Was like hearing a narrator on television open a movie. So I probably shouldn't take any credit for it at all! ha
Lovely character formation in only 50 words.
Walnuts look like brains because they are good for your brain 🧠, nature wanted to make sure you knew.
ha ha thanks
Love this, very nicely turned story... sweet and sour!
Here's my attempt at the 50 word story: https://steemit.com/fiftywords/@bentheredonethat/old-man-a-fifty-word-short-story
This is actually very good. It's not easy to keep your text short, with good structure and on the point :)
Are you going to give it a try?
thank you