Very nice, @roxy-cat! I absolutely love that moving water image.
One teensy thing. You want to change "draw" to "drew" since you have past tense working.
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Very nice, @roxy-cat! I absolutely love that moving water image.
One teensy thing. You want to change "draw" to "drew" since you have past tense working.
Thank you for pointing out. I was sure there are mistakes as I wrote the post in the car with my daughter jumping all over me. @grammarnazi already paid a visit. Amendment made. 🙂
That’s amazing you were able to post under those circumstances! 😆
I had a draft and started to work on it when the little tornado hit me. And I really wanted to share my story since I skipped last week. Lesson learnt: always triple check before posting. 🙂
I could have done it later on but the internet connection is not very stable in the mountains.
I'm so impressed! Thank you for persisting through challenges to get your story posted. It's really a conversation starter!
Thank you for your support, @jayna. It means a lot. I joined your challenge some time ago as I swa it a good way to practice my English and writing skills. But soon I started to love it and I cannot imagine a week without an entry. Your feedback is more than welcomed, plus that I'm learning a lot from such a talented writer as you.
Not to mention the great stories I'm reading every week. 🙂