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RE: Joyful Loss - A Fifty Word Short Story

in #fiftywords7 years ago

I love this so much, both - the short and the love story that follows. Not such a small thing, that Jess. Not for either of you, only you're the only one that knows it already, hence the mourning of it..... One of these days when she's much older, she'll pine for that too-long and touch of your hands untangling the strands. And she too will miss it.

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Thank you, I knew you would get it hugs