Don't Look! a #fiftywords short story for @jayna

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Don't Look! a #fiftywords short story for @jayna


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Don't Look!

She let go!
Dropping to her knees, breathless.
"Why did you do that? You scared the shit out of me!"
'Practising. To swing higher I gotta let go for a sec!'
"Momentum?"
'Yeh!'
The girl started again!
Mum covered her eyes.
"Was I this bad?"
Grandpa rolled his eyes
'You were worse!'
End

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     6 years ago  

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     6 years ago  

    This is terrific, @anonymummy! You've really captured an intriguing moment in time, as well as some great characters. Great job with the "danger" prompt, too. You did it! Applause, applause!