OK fine... This had my eyes glued to my phone for an unwasted period of time. Your narrative skills are amazing.. And the tones of dialogues you spiced around the last part of the story, really did give it a satisfactory balance. At least it open a window, where one could connect a bit with a part of the characters.
I wish I could write like you when I grow up 🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌