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RE: The witness - Fiction- Short story- chapter 2

in #fiction6 years ago

Great! The suspense and emotion kept me tensed up.
Please don't let him get into any trouble.
But can't he easily dispose the gun and who was murdered?
I guess I'll find out in the next post.
Very interesting piece.

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Strongly, there is tension.