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RE: The ink well fiction prompt#12/Jasmine's short break.

in #fiction4 years ago

This is an interesting take on childhood experience. Most children prefer summer. This child has the opposite reaction. You make that reaction believable. We feel the child's discomfort under the sun. We almost feel as though we are perspiring as she is

almost soaked up with sweat

We feel like children ourselves as the child rides home and

paddled the bicycle with all strength and as fast as i can.

Thank you for posting this story of childhood in the Ink Well community.