Man, you're right. I re-read that, and what a weird choice of words. The whole paragraph sucked. It was 5am when I finished the text, so I guess I was just tired. Re-wrote it.
Thanks for pointing that out!
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Been there! I can be on a hot streak and churn out the best literature I have ever produced. The next day when I look at it, I wonder what I could ever have been thinking when I wrote whatever was on the page. I did that?? No way!