Thank you my dear! I added some stuff. My problem is how descriptive to get in the murder scenes (I have a very vivid imagination and am afraid I'll take them too far).
By the way, did you see the beautiful portrait Paolo made me? Incredible- what a talent!!! If I could write half as good as he paints, I'd be a millionaire!
I watched Paolo while he work on your portrait and I say "Wow, it's Rich!!!". Dear friend, your are an excellent writer as Paolo is an excellent painter, believe me ^_^
I was so moved when he sent it to me... I can never thank him enough- nobody's ever done anything like that for me before! Both of you have been such wonderful friends.