I think you need to read my comment on the first chapter of this your book. Many thanks.

https://steemit.com/fiction/@giantbear/re-rooneey-re-giantbear-memories-of-a-lifetime-chapter-2-20180410t135122162z#@penauthor/re-giantbear-re-rooneey-re-giantbear-memories-of-a-lifetime-chapter-2-20180419t221101151z

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