Very well done, @thinknzombie! I love how the identity of the person in line is revealed. This is so poignant. And it really shows the power of micro-fiction; you have demonstrated how it’s possible to suggest a much larger story within the confines of fifty words.
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Thank you @jayna! I'm really pleased with the story and grateful to have won that round.
Well done. I love your participation. Please keep it up!