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RE: Insanity (Mars, Part 4)

in #fiction7 years ago

Damn. Her mother getting killed was a sad part. After all she is a teenager. As I understand, her father is already dead? Not sure I read about it in the earlier parts, but how did her father die?

I like the way, you stop writing at a very interesting plot where you leave us wondering what will happen next. :D Can't wait for your next chapter, but hey take your time and write a good one. Don't mind waiting for more interesting plots.

Keep up the good work.

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"To be honest, I didn't have any good birthdays after my father died in an oil platform accident" it's mentioned in part 2 :)

But yes, poor Hannah is an orphan now

Ah. I thought I read it. My memory is definitely not what it used to be. :P