Powerful closing lines!
Xu Hai is a heroine we can't help but love.
Li Wei, he with the harem... well, he does have humanity.
“Stay with me,” he mumbled in his sleep. “Please.”
When Li Wei awoke at four in the morning, he was alone...
Sheesh!
How are we not going to feel for him after that?
Great writing! Does this mean
Ruby Red and Gentilberry Green: A Fantastical Romance - Part XVII is complete...? (Off to see)
(I tend to wait for at least 3 chapters in a row. I won't watch a new TV show until the season is over and I can binge-watch. In fiction workshops, I want the whole novel, now, not a chapter a time. It's not just greed.... it's ADHD... I can't remember much if I have to wait a week for the next part!