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RE: Hair o' the Dog - Part 3 of 3

in #fiction7 years ago

Jess, this story is better than any New Yorker magazine story I've ever seen.
This: The dog can’t look me in the eye. I wonder whether he’s more ashamed of his broken body or his breaking my promise. I want to tell him it isn’t his fault, that I should never have claimed he could keep her safe. That the broken promise was mine even if I used him in the making of it.

But there's more. Every line. EVERYTHING - line after marvelous line -
You are waaaay bigger than Steemit, Jess.
And better than The New Yorker.
Congratulations on being Curied - next, you belong on the Best Seller list!

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Goodness Carol you're going to cost me a fortune in Crisco. I'll need to slather it on my head just to fit it through the doors, lol. Thank you so much for this overwhelming, kind, and generous comment <3