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RE: Terminal - [Short Story - Costa Concordia Shipwreck]

in #fiction7 years ago

OH MY GOD I CUSS WORDED IN MY HEAD AT THE END.
UGHHHH you're more bitter than the espresso I had for breakfast this morning!
I loved it. It's kinda odd, the twists and turns it made that were awfully convenient and/or unnecessary, but that's okay. I'd explain myself, but I have class in ten minutes.
Keep it up homie! (This is what y'all were talking about with a shipwreck in the queue!)

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Yea, there is a bit of convenience to the setup, but most stories/movies/tv shows have little contrived things that happen at awfully convenient times. (I'd be happy to hear what you feel might be the worst offenders there, tell me on discord!)

I'm glad I got you to swear though....in your head. Mission accomplished! :)

Getting me to swear was the mission?? Goodness.

Well, it was A mission. Lets not get cocky here!

Cocky is my mid... nah, I ain't gonna lie like that. My middle name is Conceited.