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RE: The Allies of Old; Book Two- Renewal: Chapter Eighteen "Something's Gotta Give"

in #fiction7 years ago (edited)

When he came in the room naked, I knew things would start to get frisky but at least there was nothing too feisty happened haha.
Now, what could be in that damn cellar.
Can't wait to read the next chapter!

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In my original version I am a bit more descriptive with that part, but I toned it down ;)