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RE: It's all in the cards - Part One

in #fiction5 years ago

This looks to be a serious stuff. When I saw the blog is posted in meditation tag, and from the few lines, then I thought it is something related to human well being, motivational stuff like how to overcome depression, stress etc. But it seems to be entirely different that it had taken the readers to an another world.

sorry to say that I had not seen its earlier episodes, so I honestly not able to get the exact Plot, but the characters Norman, Jenny and the way how you tried to portray about a thief's mind by ensuring that it has got a prime importance in the storyline (looking at Jenny's necklace etc)

Waiting for the next episode. Thank you

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I do not recall what I was thinking when I write this first half. I'm glad you enjoyed it though. I am working on the second half now and hope to have it published tonight or tomorrow morning.

Thank you for taking the time to read and respond. It is much appreciated.