This is wonderful! I loved reading it and expect to go back and read the missed episodes too. Well done!
I'm planning on releasing a serialized story on Steemit too! My favorite parts of your story your writing! It is so good and descriptive with this challenging setting without being too mired in details. I tend to get lost in irrelevant details that detract from the sex sensations and emotions of my characters.
I feel like I'm riding the virtual reality simulation with Alexis; there smelling the same things and the ever welling anxiety with every minute detail that is just a little off.
AN example of your excellent description without being too excessive in explication was where the speaker talks about the three blinks to get out of the simulation; how it is standard, and how it is even included in the commercials. I found the world building so subtle and profound; like the writer has thought of all the implications and what it would be like to suffer in this circumstance.
This was excellent~! I am looking forward to more!
Thank you, thank you, again for your encouraging words!! I'm so glad to have found a small community of like-minded writers here on Steemit, and it's such an important thing to support one another :)
I hope you know how much it means to have your support! I'm trying to learn more about Steemit and would love to chat sometime about writing and such. Do you ever use the Steemit chat? I haven't yet, but I want to!
I didn't know it existed! (the steemit chat). I'm new too; only started in January :) I figure just comment a lot, post often, and create good quality content. I just joined the service waiting on my confirmation mail.
I'd be happy to chat! and You're very welcome for the comment! You totally earned it with that awesome story. I'm looking forward for more :)
Thanks so much! :)