About the tags,: You have used the tags entertainment,religion,education and so on. So you need to think about what category your post fits in. Your post fits in the category introduceyourself. All introduction should use this tag. If you need help there are tags for that for instance the tag help.
Here are some links:
https://steemit.com/steemit/@beanz/steemit-posting-tutorial
https://steemit.com/steem/@biletskiy/secrets-of-tags-in-steemit-how-to-use-it-properly-yes-you-better-do-it-to-be-more-popular
Also, be sure to contact the @steemprentice group.,and go to steemit.chat where you can find help,and connect with other users.
Hope that helps, I wish you good luck, and feel free to ask more questions later.