Very well written. However I think you should create breaks in your paragraphs. Dense blocks of text make it imposing for the reader to go on.

I have also written something on dxchain;

https://steemit.com/dxchain/@ozkdawg/a-recurring-bugbear-in-the-blockchain-world-non-searchable-whitepapers-i-am-look-at-you-dxchain