Nicely done. You asked for creative feedback. Your writing is good, the topic is timely, the imagery is beautiful. I'd consider cutting it down a bit. It's long. And also, add features such as sub heads and bullet lists. If you're not sure how to do that in html, there are some great articles on markdown here on Steemit, or you can get the free program MarkdownPad2 to make the edits in, before pasting your articles here. headings and bullets, numbered lists, using quotes, italics and bold type, make your content scanable for more views.
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Thank you very much. I really do appreciate you taking the time to look and provide some really comprehensive feedback.