Crap! a five minute #freewrite challenge

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Thank you @mariannewest for another fabulous #freewrite challenge. Today's prompt is toilet

To learn more and take part visit https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/day-66-5-minute-freewrite-prompt-toilet

If you don't know what a freewrite is visit @mariannewest, here is a link to the introduction post: https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/writers-or-wanna-be-writers-wanted-be-free-freewrite

Sorry about the sound quality...!

Crap!

The toilet was blocked again.

Joe sighed and went to the cupboard under the sink in search of the plunger.

For fucks sake, what a shit day! Literally, as it turned out.

He went back to the toilet and started plunging away trying not to look at what was coming up as he worked.

Who would have thought it would have come to this? All the years studying, working to get his degree, masters and the Phd. And now here he was, elbow deep in other people's crap.

He tried the flush. The water rose up, but then there was a whoooshhing sound and the filth was sucked round the u-bend. He picked up the cleaning clothes and begun to clean the bowl and then the floor.

Why couldn't they just come and tell him when they blocked it? No, people are just pigs.

Worse than pigs.

Comparing most humans to the big friendly beasts was an insult to the pig. Naturally clean, and much more intelligent than a lot of the human beings he...


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I couldn't post my comment on Dtube. But it seems I can upvote there and upvote here. That is great!!!
Love it!!!!! Thank you for taking the video challenge and love that you recorded on the toilet!!!! Well done!!!
https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/day-66-5-minute-freewrite-prompt-flash

Thank you! Have a good Christmas!

Ewwwwww. It hurts my mind to even imagine this. Ewwww. >.<
Well written, but oh the image that has been burned in my head.

You just gave me nightmares.
Thanks a lot, @felt.buzz. Have a resteem.

i have upvoted you dude, vote me back thanks

Thanks! Hope your day is less crappy from now on! ;)

You are fab! Great writing and fun video! Hope to see more!