I thought it sounded pretty damn good. It had kind of a Phillip Phillips vibe to it.

Although, since you spent most of the post talking about how not-great it was, the whole time my brain kept straining to agree with you and looking for things that sucked about it.

A good rule for life- Never point out a negative. If you say your work is great, people will probably believe you. If you tell them it sucks, they will probably believe you.