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Did you for real make this yourself?! I actually was digging the vibe of it this time around. I think there were a few sounds effects I would drop out to smoothen it up a bit (like around 1:08-1:10). But it has a groovy/trancy appeal to it.

That's a promising first question! haha
Answer: Yes! I created this myself for better or worse.
Definitely noted the criticism! Will make these changes for the final version as you wish!

Wonderful feedback and lovely candid reporting.
Hope to hear from you again!

I mean it's your piece of art so you know what you want it to sound like better than me. But great job. Keep it up!