Now this is not just a masterpiece this is a bomb hidden inside a beautiful flowers, the way you flirt with words is simply amazing, this reminds me of a song fifteen men on a dead man's chest it's quite anecdotal, the way you coin the lines
The people are disney animations.
The streets are glass
That endlessly shatters but
Never finishes breaking.
The metaphors in here, are so amazing especially in the first line, that was something out of space beyond creation.
I must say you're really getting to a peak go burst the bubble of sweet poetry, I love the whole stanza quite epic in nature and very long.
You wouldn't have done it well without add that final spice, that is, the voice and the spoken style which you used.
Ah my friend this is a beauty, you really are the best.
Hey @josediccus all my congratulations on your achievement! That's a big milestone. You're really bringing a lot to Steemit and I hope you never desist in doing do! Have an awesome day and I appreciate your remarks :-)