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RE: Pollen from a distant galaxy (original poetry & ambient piano)

in #dsound7 years ago

The universe is an endless fruit vine
:)

In the absorbent extrapolation
There is a hypnosis — clean &
Cheerful in the conveyance
Of the divine cloud
Of star gametes
That spread
Through
Mother
Void.

This is beautiful. Maybe i am unable to fully grasp the meanings you intended here but looking at it from a biological angle, your praise and appreciation of nature is masterly painted on a canvass Michelangelo would envy :).

I read this, and all i could picture was the meiosis, the nuclei being ferried about in pollen grains. All in the description of this heavenly body.

Again, this is beautiful :)