Double three is six
.original poetry with reading
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featuring photos by Katarina Stefanović
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Double three is six
I am double your racing mind of glass
and double your modest height.
I am twice as firm as fervent words
when last we said goodnight.
You are double my limb'ring arms of wind
and double my careless ease;
You are twice as soft as longing looks
exchanged as wordless pleas.
I am half your dazzling tower-balloon
and half from your colored pain.
I am only a crop of your canvas delightful
mixing the sunshine with rain.
You are half my tow'ring obsidian mount
and half from my quicksilver lake;
You are only a strip from my erudite scroll
discerning the real from the fake.
Written by
@d-pend
4/12/18
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Photos by
Katarina Stefanović
.1 — "Sunset on the Mont Blanc summit" [cropped]
2 — "Kingdom at the top"
3 — "Green velvet"
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great rhytm of a poem!
it's very easy and very pleasant to read it
as a rule, I'm seeking for your audio-vesion, turn it on and then read it together with you (it's easier for me to pronounce it in the right way, though to tell you the truth it takes me much time and several tries, but you're my distant and hidden English teacher, so I try-))
but this time I managed to read it without repeating after you, yohooo-))
When you love, then you see how capable and adjustable you are for expanding or shrinking, going smoothy along, and playing that energy dance with your loved one, just in order to keep alive that beautiful feeling of love inside of you. Namaste.
Nice one :) 3 is the magic number...
Nice poem excellent to read that so nice :)
Hey dan! i see most people that comments are females, seems this very one is meant for females heheheh!
I love that part....
I always think before now that double three is Thirty three (33) but i'm just getting to know is six(6).. go @d-pend!
Again I hear two voices in your poem @d-pend. Reading this I am very thankful for my other half. Brilliant!!
You are double my limb'ring arms of wind
and double my careless ease;
You are twice as soft as longing looks
exchanged as wordless pleas.
Loving the concept and the wording on this one:)
I am beginning to like your poetry a lot. Keep it up.
So???whats next at comparsion's end???
As always, the stye of rhyme and the meaning of the word in your poem is amazing
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