DnW Poetry Contest #1: The Beginning Become Stronger

hi all, here is my entry, I hope enjoy it! :)

I found myself alone in the dark and storm
I shouted a loud until my voice flying gones
I knew it would be useles
because no one would hear and notice

I keep doing it with a big hope
somebody would find and drag me out
now, my tears stream down my face
I felt my heart beating so fast

I's scared because I couldn't stand for any longer.
I had been trying to run for cover
I just could step for some metres
the faces the peole that I love appeared closer

suddenly, they whisper;
this is a beginning of life which would make you become stronger...

Original Poetry
by
@aburiski

anyway, I am sorry for the picture's illustraion, I am not good at drawing but I have to try it.

Hi everyone!!
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