Thank you kindly my friend - all of my writings are (oft out of context) aspects of a broader project that will eventually be conjoined into a singular cohesive narrative. Hence at this moment, some will flow a little easier than others. By posting them it helps me with the editing process - hence most are still very much a work in progress. There were some things in part three that didn't flow as well as I'd liked so I've gone back and edited/expanded certain points - whereas with this one I've pretty much left it as it is - so thank you for noticing. I'm so far pretty happy with the impending chapter five - but I will know for sure once it is up! :D