Once again, well done! You've done a great job of including lots of detail without having to make your story 20 million pages long. I love how you tend to have a surprise twist at the end too!
Once again, well done! You've done a great job of including lots of detail without having to make your story 20 million pages long. I love how you tend to have a surprise twist at the end too!
Thank you! I do like to have a twist at the end - it just seems a bit boring if you know what happens at the end of the story.