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True. That's the plan. But if the interpretation derails totally off the idea it will not be approved. It's a life poem and that's your tip. Good luck once again

And yet the whole steemit experience is about life. Whenever we enter a new community it is like we are being reborn. The same principles apply. I do not believe this interpetation is a total derail, just narrowly focused. But hey your poem, your contest, your rules.