WIN 20 SBD - 2 Sentence Horrifying Blind Dates Contest # 2: Last Chance To Enter (Original Contest)

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Today (Saturday) & tomorrow (Sunday) are your last days to enter so get to writing before you miss out on a chance to win. Scroll down below for the rules and check out all of the entries so far. I already have my winner in mind, so if you enter in now, you may be able to sway my decision as I am looking for more competition. In a previous contest, a last minute entry stole the win so it is possible! Give it your best shot and pull out something creative and unique!

Who here has gone on a blind date before? Isn't it unnerving to think of some really crazy and spine tingling discoveries of the strangers we could possibly end up dating without knowing who or what they truly are? First impressions are everything, and this can also blind us from the dire truth of what their true intentions are. Can you come up with a horrifying scenario for a first blind date experience? It can be written from the perspective of a male or female but don't forget the Horror. I always want to keep Steemit interesting and introduce contests and engaging creative opportunities that I want to see here in our thriving, growing diverse community. I don't have much to give, but it's always important to give back, whether we have a little or a lot. So let's blindly feel our way in the darkness to it!

RULES

What kind of Horrifying Blind Date can you describe and write within a two sentence frame? In order to be a valid entrant, please be sure to follow my other profile @peacemaker, up vote this post and resteem it and Submit your 2 Sentence Horrifying Blind Date below in the comments section for it to be a valid entry. I am making this a weekly contest, and will rotate out some different contests as well. The deadline to submit is Sunday July 30th, 2017 at 11:59pm Germany time, so anyone entering on Next Monday will not be a valid entrant. One entry per person so give it your best shot. There are no length restrictions to a sentence as long as your two sentences are grammatically structured and readable. Don't rush, take your time, and check for spelling mistakes as it might ruin my experience reading your Horrifying Blind Date scenario on the first time through. Winner will be announced Monday.



Had to include some gifs of the infamous Misery horror film


That should give you a more than enough time to think up something creative with a dangerous, nail-biting, hair-raising or even cringeworthy twist. I look forward to being entertained by your endless and limitless ideas of horrendous first blind date scenarios, I welcome any true stories as well. Some get trapped into the scariest of relationships forever. Remember: Don't allow yourself to be rooted in fear, lack of confidence and self-destruction


HERE ARE THE VALID ENTRIES FROM EVERYONE SO FAR, DON'T WORRY, THERE IS STILL TIME TO ENTER
IF YOU DO NOT SEE YOUR ENTRY HERE, IT IS MOST LIKELY THAT YOU DIDN'T FOLLOW ALL OF THE RULES TO QUALIFY AS A VALID ENTRY SO PLEASE BE SURE TO CHECK AGAIN, ONCE YOU FIX IT, I'LL ADD YOUR ENTRY HERE BELOW


@Himshweta

I was young that time and it was an amazing dinner
resulting to a seductive love making at her bedroom
until I started feeling weak, and saw some white hair
dropping from above
but found nothing when I looked up, so I continued, soon to realise
that those hair were mine
which were black
when I saw the mirror last time
leaving me startled and I setback to find
my skin turning as of an old man's
but she was getting younger which shook me
and I ran to the bathroom to see myself grown 30 years forward.

The doors knocked and she said in a seductive voice - "Give it to me Daniel"
leaving me horrified
but I didn't open and she broke it with a kick,
she smiled horrifically and it was then when I saw her vampire teeth this time,
leaving me pale
making me realise
that I need to run away or it would be my last night of this life
but had no idea what to do and she stepped closer when suddenly I saw the window behind her
stopping the early morning sunrays, giving me an idea to break it and so I picked the wiper,
slammed her with it
and hit the window hard
allowing the sun rays to brighten the washroom
and she started burning giving me a chance
to run out of the washroom, locking her screaming inside, I grabbed my clothes and car keys and ran
with all my strength,
to never come back again.


@Edgarstudio

A private romantic dinner with candles was setup by her handsome blind date in the comfort of his immaculately clean restaurant. Little did she know that he would be her own personal chef that evening as he sharpened his butchers knives, lined up his favorite seasonings, and pulled out some black garbage bags, watching her with a menacing smile from the kitchen, as she sipped on the red wine glass that had blood in it from his previous victim.


@Talalofficial

Got a really beautiful girl on a blind date.
Everything was going perfect until....
She washed her face...😥


@Sleepyheadspeaks

My friend has set this date up after tinkering online for a few days.
When I met her, found it to be his own girlfriend!


@Anthonyadavisii

Went on a blind date in early May as a man with a severe hair allergy. Late in the night, to my horrific surprise, turns out she was a Furry in human disguise.


@Extras

We met and had a great evening in the restaurant, followed by an even greater night at my place.
In the morning she was unnaturally happy, dragging my hand to her belly and saying : "Can you feel it? It's kicking!"


@Motomania

Jillian had the ability to enchant any man.
When William, whom she called "mr. Next", came into her apartment after a short blind date, he didn't even notice the pile of bodies in the corner and calmly walked towards the dissection table.


@Counterweight

Three million eight thousand seven hundred forty six...
Going crazy, Jim was counting the water drops falling from the ceiling of the cell, where he woke up after his first date, seven years ago.


@Cambassador2614

I sat at the table to talk blind folded to the person across from me so that we wouldn't make our first impression based on looks and as she started to give her life story of needing a new spouse because her husband was going to leave her once she had the baby and realized it wasn't his due to her sleeping with multiple men of a different race. I was also looking to cheat on my wife after feeling distant from her since she got pregnant and I felt bad for her until we took the blind folds off and I realized it was my own wife and unfortunately I lost my mind, killed her and the baby, and now I'm serving a life sentence, which it turned out she was joking about the whole thing and was just telling the story as a dare from her girlfriends not knowing I was going to be there.


@Monajam

I went on a date with my partner and we both were blind-folded so we do not see the witch that is always with us to add a horror element to our romantic date.


@Karlan.haiden

We both loved birds in a way most people wouldn’t understand; I was his mockingbird, he was my sparrow, and we were to meet in a park bench at dusk to see each other the first time. I sat alone for hours and was about to leave when, in that dimly lit road, I noticed hundreds of sparrows looking down on me from trees.


Check my previous posts on my @peacemaker & @verbal-d account for examples of a 2 Horrifying Blind Date

Cold Hearted Collector

Blindfolded Swingers

Blue The Candles Too Soon


The winner will be announced on Monday, have fun brainstorming



Thank you for reading this post in its entirety, I hope you enjoyed it for what it's worth.


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Please follow all the rules before submitting an entry. Upvote this post, resteem it, make sure your entry is only 2 sentences long, and follow my @peacemaker account to be a valid entrant. Thank you everyone in advance.

Can we throw in an image for added effect?

Yeah, images are no problems, you can edit one in, or use images for future entries in future contests if you participate again.

Please follow all the rules before submitting an entry. Upvote this post, resteem it, make sure your entry is only 2 sentences long, and follow my @peacemaker account to be a valid entrant. Thank you everyone in advance.

Went on a blind date in early May as a man with a severe hair allergy. Late in the night, to my horrific surprise, turns out she was a Furry in human disguise.

Thank you for your painfully allergic entry, I absolutely hate allergies and that is indeed a horror to be in close proximity to one's own allergic kryptonite like hair from a Furry. I shall add it to the list above.

Got a really beautiful girl on a blind date.
Everything was going perfect until....
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She washed her face...😥

Posting this time with much hope as before..... Hope you like it...

Thank you for your funny yet true entry, there are many people out there who wear too much make up in hopes of disguising their true selves. I shall add it to the entry list above.

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upvoted, resteem

it was a best time to met him in a village field for the first time, he brought a colorful ring for me. time passes quickly, now after 5 years we are still in love.

Thank you for your entry, but you didn't follow the rules and this isn't a horror entry.

My friend has set this date up after tinkering online for a few days.
When I met her, found it to be his own girlfriend!

Thank you for your entry but I think it is more surprising than horrifying. I would be pretty surprised, confused and speechless. I shall add your entry to the list above.

We met and had a great evening in the restaurant, followed by an even greater night at my place.
In the morning she was unnaturally happy, dragging my hand to her belly and saying : "Can you feel it? It's kicking!"

Thank you for your funny entry but you forgot to resteem this post, I would be pretty surprised if any female were able to get pregnant from a one night stand and the very next morning you'd be able to feel an actual baby kicking. Either that, or the woman is just straight up crazy. Either way it made me laugh. When you follow all the rules, I'll add your entry to the list above, but for right now it is not valid. Thanks

resteemed

Jillian had the ability to enchant any man.
After each ritual, she would wash the blood from her knives, drag the body to the pile in the corner and scream towards the door : "Next!"

Thank you for your murderous entry, but it has to be blind date related, and please follow all the rules to be considered valid.

Can I change it then? Let's see...

Jillian had the ability to enchant any man.
When William, whom she called "mr. Next", came into her apartment after a short blind date, he didn't even notice the pile of bodies in the corner and calmly walked towards the dissection table.

Does that count?
// Also - I resteemed and upvoted the post.

Thanks for changing it, that's a lot better, I'll add it to the entry list above.

Hellen was panting and running with bare feet and no clothes, while the assassin was still on the balcony, aiming his gun at her back.
This was definitely her husband's doing...

Thank you for your assassination entry, but it has to be blind date related, and please follow all the rules to be considered valid.

My idea was that since the blind date was already in the context, I could get away with not mentioning it. After all I have only 2 sentences. If I said that it started with a date, the sentences would have been less engaging.


Here is the story with blind date theme:


Hellen was panting and running with bare feet and no clothes, while the assassin was still on the balcony, aiming his gun at her back.
This stupid blind date was definitely her husband's doing...

Thanks for changing it. The sentences can be much longer so you don't feel limited, as long as you only write two sentences. I'll add your entry to the list above.

I can make a sentence of 3000 words too, but it wouldn't roll on the tongue, would it?
If one is telling a story, he has to make it nice to the ear and leave some details to the imagination.

It's all speculative interpretation and preference. Either way, a masterpiece can be found in either form you choose to write. Thanks for participating, good entry

Please, note that grammatically one cannot have 'and' occurring more than once in the same sentence. That is a run-on sentence.

If you are referring to the joining of two clauses, I understand but however, this is open to interpretation in regards to this contest, and I know whose entry you're referring to, yet they were the only entrant at the time, and I realize that they tried their best to write two complete sentences, although long, and that English is not their mother language. I take all this into consideration, and I appreciate your note thank you, I already know what a run-on sentence is and I have studied English grammar extensively, being an English Major. I will pick the winner based on many factors, not only grammar. Thanks again

Well, I guess I could have smuggled more meaning into my entry if that were the case but you are going to choose how you want anyway. It's not really a fair game if one was to follow the rules you had prescribed to a T(as in two sentences per normal conventions) which I believe I had done. I get it that you are trying to hook them up but that sort of practice does discourage those that more precisely follow the rules to participate in the future. It is what it is.

I am fair, and this is a fair game. The entry you're speaking about is two sentences, they used commas, and there are only two Periods . .
And thank you for also following the rules just like that other entrant you seem to be worried about. I am not hooking anyone up, they followed all the rules, but I can just tell that their mother language is not English, but they still gave two lengthy sentences.

I encourage you to read my entry. It is actually funny specifically if you know what a Furry is, I digress. Still, I am disappointed that rules had turned out to be so pliable. It's like " Let me bend the rules so I can win". I don't care what the language is. That is the language of "not cool" in my book. If you were gonna let people get by outside of the parameters, you would have done well to not include the parameters . It only puts those that were diligent and exercised care in observing them at a disadvantage.

I am getting to reading your entry, and I don't know what a Furry is, but I'll research it. Like I said before, I'm not bending the rules, nor is any of the Valid Entrants above, everyone has written two sentences, no matter the length and upvoted and resteemed. Thanks

Here you go.

They are definitely perfect for my children, never knew about that, I had just saw them on Google for the first time about ten minutes before, thanks for the extra photo.


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I sat at the table to talk blind folded to the person across from me so that we wouldn't make our first impression based on looks and as she started to give her life story of needing a new spouse because her husband was going to leave her once she had the baby and realized it wasn't his due to her sleeping with multiple men of a different race. I was also looking to cheat on my wife after feeling distant from her since she got pregnant and I felt bad for her until we took the blind folds off and I realized it was my own wife and unfortunately I lost my mind, killed her and the baby, and now I'm serving a life sentence, which it turned out she was joking about the whole thing and was just telling the story as a dare from her girlfriends not knowing I was going to be there.

Well that escalated out of control quickly, thank you for your twisted entry. I shall add it to the entry list above.

I went on a date with my partner and we both were blind-folded so we do not see the witch that is always with us to add a horror element to our romantic date. For proof, see this picture http://prntscr.com/g25d4z

Thank you for your witch entry, I shall add it to the list above.

I hope I win because my story is really horror. The witch is with us 24/7 :D

All I can say is best of luck to your entry. I am a very tough judge :)

We both loved birds in a way most people wouldn’t understand; I was his mockingbird, he was my sparrow, and we were to meet in a park bench at dusk to see each other the first time. I sat alone for hours and was about to leave when, in that dimly lit road, I noticed hundreds of sparrows looking down on me from trees.

Thank you for your entry, I'll add it to the list above.

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Thank you for your time lapse entry, but please follow all the rules to be considered valid.

Thank you, I'll add it to the entry list above.