Welcome! That's a great start. Kudos to you!!!
The only correction: your first line is six syllables, it needs to be five. Can you revise?
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Welcome! That's a great start. Kudos to you!!!
The only correction: your first line is six syllables, it needs to be five. Can you revise?
Yes, I do. I like this game!
It's great understand
some more about the Haiku
I am so happy
Ha! Lovely.